I think it is not as easy as before,
instead it is a challenge class for me
to improve my writing ability.
What I always worry about is that
I will not improve after
my teacher makes comments on my writing.
Anyway, since Bill is our wiring teacher,
I have to abide by the way he teaches us.
And I will make an effort to write better and better.
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Good first post. Very clear and easy to understand.
A couple of usage issues:
1. "What I always worry is that" should be "What I always worry about is that";
2. "after my teacher makes the comments on" should be "after my teacher makes comments on" ["the" is not required here, but you can say "his" (in my case) or "her";
3. "I will make my effort" should be "I will make an effort".
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