2007年12月21日 星期五
12/21
I have been expecting for going to Kaohsiung by motorcycle with seven of my friends tomorrow. I think I would not fall asleep because I am very excited about this journey. Therefore, I went to play basketball with my friends at night so that the time could go fast. We have already scheduled our journey one month ago and planed to stay at Kaohsiung for two days. Without having holiday on Christmas Day, we decide to go to Kaohsiung and celebrate it beforehand. In addition, we will exchange Christmas present while we are in Hotel. This is the first time that we ride motorcycle to Kaohsiung and I think it will be fun.
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Your first sentence needs major work: "I have been looking forward to going to..." is idiomatic and natural English.
In the second sentence, the verb tense is wrong: it should be "will not fall asleep".
The present perfect is not used when the action is obviously over and cannot be changed, so you must say "We scheduled our...".
The next sentence has to be "Because we don't have a holiday on Christmas Day,...".
And the next one has some careless bloopers too: "we will exchange Christmas presents while we are in the hotel".
And the final sentence: "This is our first time to ride motorcycles to...".
I rode my motorcycle to Kaohsiung a few times many, many years ago. It wasn't fun at all. It takes far too long and is far too dangerous, in my humble opinion. I'd rather take the train.
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